After The Storm

23 May

Written for :

Light and Shade Challenge Friday 23rd May 2014

photo credit: by sulaco229 at rgbstock.com
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Two girls stagger through the open door barely noticing the broken branches beneath their bare feel. They shiver in unison, soaked to the skin, their hair and nightgowns caked with mud. The youngest, wide-eyed and frightened, clings to her sister.

“It’s going to be o.k. Cathy” the eldest soothes ” Mama said if we ever got separated that we were to wait at this old chapel.”

The girls are startled as a man approaches from the ruins of the altar.

“Don’t be afraid” says the devil as he slyly tucks his tail behind him “I have been waiting for you..”

 100 wds.
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8 Responses to “After The Storm”

  1. Thomas Marlowe May 23, 2014 at 7:20 pm #

    I think Mama gave bad advice… or perhaps she knows something her girls don’t. Excellent piece of work – atmospheric and suitably creepy. Splendid.

  2. tnkerr May 23, 2014 at 8:21 pm #

    A bad case of “Out of the frying pan and into the fire”
    I was caught unaware with this one. Well done!

  3. nightlake May 24, 2014 at 6:14 am #

    sounds interesting. wonder if there is a sequel to this

  4. Mike May 24, 2014 at 11:24 am #

    There are some days that just don’t go as you hoped they would – unless of course you’re the devil!
    An ingenious take on the prompt. A lot of story in just 100 words.

  5. windandlaughter May 24, 2014 at 12:20 pm #

    *spews expletives* I’m rooting for the poor girls!

  6. Sara Healy May 24, 2014 at 3:05 pm #

    Whoa. Didn’t see that coming. I loved the description in the first paragraph. You gave us a lot in a few words and made easy for me to see these girls:~)

  7. lyssamedana May 25, 2014 at 2:07 pm #

    That is so scary! Lyssa M x

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