Chez Julie

2 May

written for : Light and Shade ( weekend)

Challenge – Friday 2nd May 2014

 The two of them are seated on the seventh floor balcony just above the patio of Chez Julie, a popular eatery in downtown Montreal.
“I don’t feel so well” he whines
“I tried to tell you that burger smelled a little off but you wouldn’t listen .. that’s your problem … you never listen to me … always eating garbage .. can’t resist free food ..”
“Stop nagging me damn you” he says as he angrily swoops down and leaves a large deposit on a table below, just as the waiter steps outside.
“Maudit pigeon”

7 Responses to “Chez Julie”

  1. Thomas Marlowe May 2, 2014 at 9:56 am #

    This was wonderful and made me laugh aloud – I do love a twist ending and this was perfect

  2. grandmalin May 2, 2014 at 10:34 am #

    Yuck! But also very funny. lol

  3. windandlaughter May 2, 2014 at 11:20 am #

    Haha, love! 😀

  4. cshowers May 2, 2014 at 11:55 pm #

    Eew – poor guy!

  5. Steve Lakey May 3, 2014 at 4:14 am #

    Great twist!

  6. Lyssa Medana May 3, 2014 at 4:38 am #

    I literally laughed out loud at this – thank you!

  7. Ashley K May 4, 2014 at 8:20 am #


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