Perfect Crime

23 Nov
Trifextra: Week Ninety-Five
And now your Trifextra prompt. This weekend, writers, it’s up to you. We want you to choose a word and use it three times in your 33 words. However, it must be either a verb, noun or adjective and the form of the word cannot change, it must appear exactly the same three times. Please highlight your chosen word in your piece before linking up below. – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.fuJAtly5.dpuf
And now your Trifextra prompt. This weekend, writers, it’s up to you. We want you to choose a word and use it three times in your 33 words. However, it must be either a verb, noun or adjective and the form of the word cannot change, it must appear exactly the same three times.
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One particular palm Sunday, Harold decided to use his palm to slip cash off of the collection plate. On his way out of church a cocoanut fell from a palm tree, killing him.
Trifextra: Week Ninety-Five
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12 Responses to “Perfect Crime”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) November 23, 2013 at 6:20 am #

    Brutal but fair you could say.

  2. kalpana solsi November 23, 2013 at 6:33 am #

    Poor Harold.

  3. jacquelinecaseypoetry November 23, 2013 at 12:41 pm #

    love your picture…funny piece. However, you mixed your use. You have 2 adjectives and a verb when you ‘palm’ something…

  4. jannatwrites November 23, 2013 at 3:50 pm #

    Oh, stealing from the offering plate is bad news. Coconut…lightning strike… all works the same, I guess 🙂

  5. unawarebutunderlined November 23, 2013 at 11:50 pm #

    Clever…

  6. atrm61 November 24, 2013 at 2:27 am #

    Ah,at least the nut gor his nutty dues;-)Loved this!

  7. Christine November 24, 2013 at 5:36 pm #

    Oh, ouch! That’ll teach him!

  8. trifectawriting November 24, 2013 at 7:04 pm #

    Haha! Death in the tropics. I love it. Thanks for linking up. Hope you’ll join our ornament swap! Send us an email if you’re interested.

  9. Ivy (Mommy Dourest) November 25, 2013 at 8:39 am #

    OMG! Such a wonderful, hilarious comeuppance. Well done!

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