Tan Renga challenge Month #XIV

13 Nov

Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIV, Patricia’s “ghosts of the ancients”


ghosts of the ancients
cast their towering shadows
on the holy ground
(c) Patricia
a land where earth and heaven
live in perfect harmony

9 Responses to “Tan Renga challenge Month #XIV”

  1. unawarebutunderlined November 13, 2013 at 4:47 pm #

    Oooo this is just lovely, heavenly!!

  2. anmol(alias HA) November 13, 2013 at 5:44 pm #

    It seems like that place. Nicely penned. 🙂

  3. jrbsays November 14, 2013 at 5:05 am #

    Built some 3000 years before heaven existed too!

    legends, wrapped in history

  4. kaykuala November 14, 2013 at 5:33 am #

    Rightly so that sustenance is enhanced. Nicely Patricia!


  5. magicalmysticalteacher November 14, 2013 at 6:30 am #

    A place of perfect harmony sounds inviting indeed!

    Ghosts of the Ancients

  6. Gillena Cox November 14, 2013 at 8:56 am #

    good to hear of such a place Patricia

    much love…

  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) November 14, 2013 at 4:03 pm #

    Wonderful tanka you created here… really harminous..

  8. Chèvrefeuille November 15, 2013 at 4:30 am #

    A well done completion of the Tan Renga you have started, with your second stanza you”ve completed your Tanka … very well done Patricia. Thank you for participating in this Tan Renga Challenge Month.

  9. Sun November 15, 2013 at 10:29 am #

    we need some of that peaceful energy… great ending.

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