Pierre’s Demise

27 Oct

Written for Sunday Photo Fiction

it can be found here: Photo Fiction: October 27th 2013

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31 10 October 27th 2013

Pierre was out for his morning stroll. So caught up was he with the beauty of the early fog that he was not paying attention to where he was going.

He got a glimpse of bus number 42, Lincoln to Treadway, reflecting in the puddle a split second before he splattered on its bumper like a june bug on a hot summer’s night.

The bus driver had seen him beginning to cross but refused to slam on his brakes for fear of endangering the lives of his full load of passengers just to spare the life of one.

Audible groans were heard from all aboard as the stench of skunk quickly permeated the vehicle’s interior.

Pierre’s final revenge..


8 Responses to “Pierre’s Demise”

  1. Al October 27, 2013 at 11:15 am #

    Haha the beautiful aroma of eau de skunk 🙂

  2. Steve Lakey October 27, 2013 at 2:29 pm #

    Nice twist. Poor Pierre!

  3. Danny James October 27, 2013 at 2:30 pm #

    Love it!


  4. misskzebra October 27, 2013 at 3:49 pm #

    Didn’t see either twist coming!

  5. deanabo October 27, 2013 at 7:01 pm #

    An awesome surprise ending.

  6. iamfunny2 October 27, 2013 at 10:55 pm #

    Wow I cringed a little with the splatter and then some more with the second twist. Very clever use of the photo and few words.

  7. anelephantcant October 28, 2013 at 6:28 am #

    AnElephant chuckles cheerily!


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