On Cloud Nine

8 Sep

Photo Fiction: September 8th 2013

24 09 September 8th 2013

Paul was really excited over this evening. The most gorgeous woman in the office and she had accepted his offer of a first date.

“What the Hell was I thinking to let her choose where we would go?”  He smouldered as they slowly made their way through the museum.

He points to the cloud suspended overhead “That’s just stupid” he snarls

“Perhaps they are happy up there” Mara smiles seductively “on cloud nine..so to speak”.

Reaching for his hand she urges him forward. “I think you will like this better” the succubus whispers as she leads him into the weapons room.

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5 Responses to “On Cloud Nine”

  1. Joe Owens September 8, 2013 at 9:14 am #

    Uh-oh first and last date?

  2. michaelalexanderchaney September 8, 2013 at 9:51 am #

    Wow! That’s a doozie of a last line.

  3. Alastair September 8, 2013 at 10:03 am #

    Ooooh … nasty lady 😀 Love it

  4. anelephantcant September 9, 2013 at 3:48 pm #

    Excellent!
    Nicely built and finished with a pow!

  5. nightlake September 10, 2013 at 6:31 am #

    poor man

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