Trifextra: Week Eighty

9 Aug
Trifextra: Week Eighty
write a 33-word response that uses the word tooth.  Your response can use any definition of the word but cannot tell the story of someone losing a tooth
There was once an aspiring writer

who wrote a short poem to delight her

he worked hard tooth-and-nail

but in the end he did fail

she thought he was really a blighter

===================

 

write a 33-word response that uses the word tooth.  Your response can use any definition of the word but cannot tell the story of someone losing a tooth. – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.WVx2nrN7.dpuf
Advertisements

11 Responses to “Trifextra: Week Eighty”

  1. djmatticus August 9, 2013 at 4:32 pm #

    Hah! Very funny, like the silly twist on the prompt.

  2. Ivy (Mommy Dourest) August 9, 2013 at 6:53 pm #

    Cute take on the prompt. I enjoyed it. 🙂

  3. jannatwrites August 10, 2013 at 12:09 am #

    I like the lighthearted tone of this 🙂

  4. summerstommy2 August 10, 2013 at 2:44 am #

    Nice rhymes I guess he could have been a fighter……

  5. Draug419 August 10, 2013 at 9:44 am #

    Poor guy. Maybe he has other talents.

  6. trifectawriting August 10, 2013 at 10:33 am #

    He should build up his skills and confidence here at Trifecta and try again, am I right? What a fun piece. Thank you for linking up!

  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) August 10, 2013 at 2:02 pm #

    Love limericks… 🙂 and I to do it in 33 words… yes that’s a challenge. fun twist.

  8. chloeaevm August 10, 2013 at 2:12 pm #

    Love it, it’s so fun!

  9. Christine August 11, 2013 at 4:37 pm #

    Oh, fabulous! I *love* that you were able to do a limerick in 33 words, and the subject is sure to delight all us Trifectans. 🙂 Great job!

  10. Let's CUT the Crap! August 11, 2013 at 5:29 pm #

    You gotta admire a guy for trying. Good one.

Trackbacks/Pingbacks

  1. HOLD ON TIGHTLY:TRIFEXTRA #80 TOOTH | an honest day or two - August 11, 2013

    […] Trifextra: Week Eighty (highfiveandraspberries.wordpress.com) […]

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: