The Bride’s Secret

27 Jul

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His brown eyes sought hers of blue. She smiled at him as he lifted the white gauzy veil.

Lowering his mouth to her sultry red lips he discovered her forked tongue. Too late..

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We want you to follow suit and give us a thirty-three word piece that has a color in it.  Use the color to describe anything you like, or use anything you like to describe your color, but keep it creative and keep it short. – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.8Qbonmyi.dpuf

We want you to follow suit and give us a thirty-three word piece that has a color in it.  Use the color to describe anything you like, or use anything you like to describe your color, but keep it creative and keep it short

Trifextra: Week Seventy-Eight
On to this weekend’s Trifextra challenge.  This weekend we are all about color here at Trifecta. – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.8Qbonmyi.dpuf
We want you to follow suit and give us a thirty-three word piece that has a color in it.  Use the color to describe anything you like, or use anything you like to describe your color, but keep it creative and keep it short. – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.8Qbonmyi.dpuf
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6 Responses to “The Bride’s Secret”

  1. Draug419 July 27, 2013 at 12:46 pm #

    bahahaha Love it.

  2. Morgan Kellum July 27, 2013 at 1:04 pm #

    Ack! That made me jump. What a creepy twist!

  3. kallanannie July 27, 2013 at 8:22 pm #

    Oh, yikes. The groom is in a bit of trouble now, isn’t he?!

  4. syllabubsea July 28, 2013 at 6:56 am #

    Love the startling ending. Marie

  5. Linda Vernon July 28, 2013 at 3:15 pm #

    Oh hahaha! Loved it!! I fear that happens all too often, Patrick. Great response!

  6. jannatwrites July 28, 2013 at 10:54 pm #

    Uh-oh…too late, indeed!

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