Imagination #4, Weeping Cherry

22 Mar

weeping cherry

The cherry tree weeps

for so great is her beauty

that her reflection

in the waters of the pond

do her self worth no justice

tanka 22/03/13

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8 Responses to “Imagination #4, Weeping Cherry”

  1. Chevrefeuille March 22, 2013 at 12:49 pm #

    Wow! What a wonderful tanka Patricia … you’ve mastered that poetry form really great. Thank you for your excellent post for this episode of Imagination.

  2. Joanne Moceri-Taveira March 22, 2013 at 12:59 pm #

    wow, beautiful, meaningful and unique….I think I’ll try a tanka soon as you have inspired me….

  3. Adriana Dascalu March 22, 2013 at 3:17 pm #

    beautiful tanka! love the idea of justice!

  4. Mariya Koleva March 22, 2013 at 3:56 pm #

    I read it over and over!

  5. Maggie (a/k/a Grace) March 22, 2013 at 5:39 pm #

    Love your interpretation of the photo…the tree seeing its reflection. I did my first tanka but have no idea if I did it right. You obviously did! Beautiful!

  6. JazzBumpa March 22, 2013 at 9:08 pm #

    poor weeping cherry
    should reflect on her problems
    with the narcissus

    Cheers!
    JzB

  7. WabiSabi March 22, 2013 at 10:34 pm #

    the old tree weeps
    for her once youthful body
    now twisted and stiff

  8. jrbsays March 22, 2013 at 11:01 pm #

    tanka very muchly. Beautiful! 🙂

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