Carpe diem “bell”

16 Feb

Tryfan_mountain_goats

Perched on mountain edge

goats warn shepherd of danger

bells falling silent

 

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15 Responses to “Carpe diem “bell””

  1. yerpirate February 16, 2013 at 5:37 pm #

    Wow! Really a clever touch!

  2. WabiSabi February 16, 2013 at 6:05 pm #

    Poor goats! Who warns them?

  3. kz February 16, 2013 at 7:17 pm #

    great interpretation. ^^ this prompt’s so cool coz everyone’s haiku is proving to be so unique with various perceptions of “bell” ^^

  4. artmusedog February 16, 2013 at 8:07 pm #

    Magnificent photo and love the line of the ‘silent warning’ ~ ^_^

  5. Magical Mystical Teacher February 16, 2013 at 9:53 pm #

    Silence can be a very powerful warning signal indeed!

    Godsong Bell

  6. Peripatetic Eric February 16, 2013 at 10:24 pm #

    What a vivid story these few lines tell.

  7. Chevrefeuille February 17, 2013 at 4:06 am #

    Silence warning … awesome take on bell. The shepherd will know if his goats are safe.

  8. Green Speck February 17, 2013 at 7:14 am #

    You did it perfectly !!!

  9. Esenga' s Voice February 17, 2013 at 7:26 am #

    Silent warning of the bells – clever!

  10. Emma at LLM Calling February 17, 2013 at 9:57 am #

    I love how bell.takes us in.such different directions, wonderful. I’m thinking of Heidi.

  11. jazzbumpa February 17, 2013 at 12:45 pm #

    ‘Falling silent”
    It’s not the drop that hurts
    It’s that sudden stop at the end

    Such a unique take
    Beautifully done
    JzB

  12. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) February 17, 2013 at 2:45 pm #

    Have to join the acclaim. How ingineous you interpret the prompt.

  13. Joanne Moceri-Taveira February 17, 2013 at 6:57 pm #

    I kept going back to read and re-read haiku….many layers here, and beautiful words/

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