hidden in its shade
a homeless man lies sleeping
as the willow weeps
Tags: Back garden, Carpe Diem, haiku, life, nature, poems, poetry
This is a beautiful haiku!
Beautifully composed haiku Patricia … very strong in it’s word choice and in good balance. Thank you for your daily effort to write and share haiku with Carpe Diem. This one is a masterpiece.
‘As the willow weeps’, a perfect ending. Bravo!
Under The Willow
beautiful and really moving..
This is really, really touching, Patricia. Thank you.
I love this haiku, so full of compassion.
A moment of silence, please, as the willow weeps…
This says a great deal in lovely words.
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