Special Chevrefeuille #5

28 Apr

Willow_Tree

hidden in its shade

a homeless man lies sleeping

as the willow weeps

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9 Responses to “Special Chevrefeuille #5”

  1. Penny L Howe April 28, 2013 at 12:46 pm #

    This is a beautiful haiku!

  2. Chevrefeuille April 28, 2013 at 6:19 pm #

    Beautifully composed haiku Patricia … very strong in it’s word choice and in good balance. Thank you for your daily effort to write and share haiku with Carpe Diem. This one is a masterpiece.

  3. yerpirategunn April 28, 2013 at 6:21 pm #

    Beautiful.

  4. jrbsays April 28, 2013 at 8:30 pm #

    ‘As the willow weeps’, a perfect ending. Bravo!
    Under The Willow

  5. kz April 28, 2013 at 9:20 pm #

    beautiful and really moving..

  6. magicalmysticalteacher April 28, 2013 at 9:39 pm #

    This is really, really touching, Patricia. Thank you.

  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) April 29, 2013 at 2:05 pm #

    I love this haiku, so full of compassion.

  8. Mark M. Redfearn April 30, 2013 at 8:14 am #

    A moment of silence, please, as the willow weeps…

    Small Shadow

  9. purplepeninportland April 30, 2013 at 11:38 pm #

    This says a great deal in lovely words.

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